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Position:Home>Poetry> Where will you place when you show?Question: Where will you place when you show!? Horsing Around Colt 49 Lead to the track Thoroughly bred to run Away I'm off kilter Leading the pack As I come around Bend to my last turn Back stretched Flying to the end Ahead by who knows Photo Finished ?rad080808 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Some times the simple ones say the most!. This is one of those!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well paced to present the racing atmosphere!. Slight intro (before race) - great amount of action and detail (during race) - and the release of tension and let down (of the photo finish)!. Well done ?Www@QuestionHome@Com Now that one wasn't run at Jefferson Downs!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com awww man and to think I had $10 on you! I need to know the final result!!Www@QuestionHome@Com lol very cute! I loved it!. I pictured a frozen (like still, not ice) man at the end!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com great title, it makes this poem fun!.!.!.got more like this!?Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |