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Question: Poem titled *Truth*!. I wrote this when I was 18/19 years old!. (I'll be 23 this month)!. Hope you like it :O)
TRUTH

Pull back the folds of animosity
Until your soul is bare
Forgive yourself, and others
Clear your mind, and find peace there
There is so much more to life – Than living for yourself
Take time to “see beyond what you seek”
And you will truly find your wealth

Through life’s unchanging struggle, you’ll find more troubles than you can bear
You will want to give in, and give up
Claiming life just isn’t fair

But just remember this “Where fear lives, faith can’t exist”
You will never know your full potential
If you always run, instead of persist

Some people learn from their past pain
Some people use it as a crutch
An excuse to mistreat others
Their own hearts they can not trust

So many complain about what they “don’t” have
Nothing they acquire will ever satisfy their greed
They are to selfish, and na?ve to see
They have so much more that what they need

Proud thinking leads to bitter feelings
An empty heart, leads to an empty life
Blind faith is ever fleeting, until hope will not suffice

~ Have an open heart, and open mind, and the truth you seek, one day you’ll find ~

No one can save you, but yourself
No one can find (your) truth
That’s something you must fight to gain
It’s not just “given” to you!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think its a beautiful poem!. i was amazed!. first i was suspecting it might not be yours then after reseraching of websites i found no poem like this!. so now i beleive you!. it is a beautiful poem!.

not everyone can write poem you know!. poets must have a good, free, and relaxed heart and mind to come up with beautiful lines like yours!.

i think you should continue writings poems!. take it from me, keep poem as a back up plan to succeed in life!.

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I couldn't make myself read past the first lines, perhaps I have a weak gag reflex!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good!. And inspiring!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its definitely a work in progress
has a ton of potential

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doesn't do anything for me, sorry!. Keep trying though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it its truthful your not given what you want or needWww@QuestionHome@Com