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Position:Home>Poetry> Will you be there when I come?Question: Will you be there when I come!? I’m Coming Will you be there Will you still want Will you show trust When I come to you I may be wrong I may be wounded I may be weak When I come to you Can you love Can you accept Can you console When I come to you I ask these things Because I know One day I will need you ?rad080808 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: With a poem like this I would prefer to recite it to myself in the mirror!. It makes you stronger when you learn to be fully independent, which includes emotional indepence!. I just learned that recently!. I`ve been betrayed, and abandoned enough!. I got so sick of it, that I said, never again will I expect anyone to even hold me!. I will hold myself!. I will love I will trust I will console myself!. I will not expect anything From anyone I must trust, I must love, Myself!. Trust me, its not in vane!. It`s in that shell & thin veil, Which you said yourself I have to protect myself!. Again Hydropro you inspire me!. This one is yours, since I borrowed your words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The poet is waiting to come to the person addressed until his needs become apparent!. This is a question one may ask oneself, but in my opinion, it would not entice the other to wait!. My immediate personal response to this poem would be something like "what about MY needs!?" Or "why should I wait, he will not come until HE needs ME!?" This is not to disparage the poem's form, but only the message as it affected me personally!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The first paragragh first line has you wondering if the other person will be there 2 and 3rd lines are about still wanting and the ability to show trust!. When you come Next paragragh There is an admittance of being wrong and being hurt, leaving you feeling weak You are wondering if the other person can love would they be willing to accept and look past errors if any This is good to plan ahead to avoid getting hurt Www@QuestionHome@Com "Will you still need me, will you still feed me, when I'm 64!?" The eternal question "why!?" is hotly followed by "will you!?" Unsurety and insecurity are Human traits!. You are not alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You need not ask!.!.!.!. Those who will be there for you Will be there because they are willing!. But when the time comes for you to come make sure you have already been there even for just a while!.!.!. Inside their heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your poem, but I would flip the coin, To me this sounds like a one way street!.Www@QuestionHome@Com See you are doing lots of thinking, and writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com of course, you silly, what are friends for!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |