I know you're there..Did you feel that?

Question: I know you're there!.!.Did you feel that!?

Some words for Elaine P!.

Now You See Me …

I felt you there
Ghostly presence
Tapping at my soul
Prodding me with silken hands
Ever so carefully
So as not to fracture
Egg shell thin veil
Covering my self worth

Looking back to my future
You were gone yet…
Forever you remain
In what I may be

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i was kinda torn between your discovery of self worth and the lingering memories of someone who touched your soul!.!.!.both is a good thing, which is why it's harder to focus on one topic, short as your poem might beWww@QuestionHome@Com

The perceived veil is actually plaque that can be scraped away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good visual of fragility and (I hope) careful handling of such!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good to have someone!.!.!.encouraging and prodding!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved how you described her hands as "silken hands!."

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Hydropro

then
now and always
being!.

truth
straight and natural
saying

real
substantial man
living

in
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