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Question: Please what do you think of this!?
Baby

Baby from the bottom of my heart
I have always knew you are the only one
That make these fairly tail dreams come true

My love for you will never despiser
Until my last breathe…
Baby I will love you

I wasn’t looking for love, not even a friend
But baby you found me
When no one wanted me you where their

I swear to god baby you have the key to my heart
And I don’t want it back, but please never lose it
Cause I do believe you’re the one for me

The apple of my eye, baby you’re the love of my life
All I am asking for is you
I want you the good, bad and everything in between

Baby it’s you and only you
So please be mine…causes I am yours
Always and forever baby



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
do not listen to these people they do not understand poetry
poetry is what you feel

and sweetheart im feeling this oneWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think its fine, I really like itWww@QuestionHome@Com