What do you think of my Beautiful Mars Trigee?

Question: What do you think of my Beautiful Mars Trigee!?

TRIGEE: The Trigee is a three-in-one poem!. They are built by combining two short poems into a third large one by stringing the lines together!. The left stanza is read first, the right stanza second, then the combined lines make the third poem!.

Again, there are no rhyme and meter requirements!.

Beautiful Mars Trigee

Talcom Powder!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Sawdust dunes,
Flour of zinc!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.In rustic hues,
Beauty so rare!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Such radient glare,
Spontanious imp!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Mars Crimson flare!.

Meaning of Flower Of Zink!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I'm confused - if 'flower of zinc' is what it is, why is yours 'flour of zinc' - I'm not being picky (honest) I really want to know!.
I'm being picky now - 'radiant' is spelled like this, and 'spontaneous' is spelled like this!.!.!.!.didn't old eraser head shout at you!?

So, your beautiful Mars trigee is perfect in sentiment and content and form, but imperfect in spelling!. =)

Well done - I don't think I have the brain for these!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Boy, are you lucky I did not get here first!. A giant soapbox would have been erected for you chastising! I liked sawdust dunes!. Why not consider starting with 'talcum powdered,' Overall, spelling errors aside, I like!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW! I love this one!.

Smugly, I remembered flour of zinc from chemistry!.

I love Talcum powder!.!.!. Sawdust dunes!.

Must do my own again!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is GREAT!
Slow down and double check your spelling before you hit that submit button!. You're working too hard on these to let them fizzle because of little mistakes!.
Again: FABULOUS!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful Trigree, beautifully doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

Enchanting dust!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am Batman!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are becoming my teacher for these!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

all Mars Trigees are cool, you know that!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it sounds cool!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

dont know Www@QuestionHome@Com