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Question: Made a poem about mi little sister what do you think!?
i have a little sister
u no what there like

they brag, they scream
they hit ,they yell

then they become a daddy's gils
so now its never her faault

they say im older
im the responsible one

so now,i no to never say its her fault
because i no the end result

she is the little one so i guess it is kind of her job
but in my head i know, i know i had mi turn as the little one



its a dirty relism poem so it doesnt have to rhym(even thought it doesnt in some parts)


what do u think is it good and if u want you can change a bit of itWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
ye it is so tru i dont have littel sis but i know people that do and well it very tru!. roflWww@QuestionHome@Com

i have a little sister,
you know what they're like!.
they brag, they scream
they hit and yell!.

they then become a daddy's girl,
and in her he sees no defect!.
now i never say, "its her fault!"
for i know the end result!

she is the little one,
so i guess its her job!.
but in my head i know,
i definitely had my turn!.!.!.

as the little one!.


*** hi! :0!.!.just did some very minor changes!.!.!. i dont want to erase your style!.!.






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i love it it makes a good point and if your parents have another child she will have to pass it down!. i like it it make perfect sence!. you the little one now that another has come along she is daddy's little girl!. but deep down you will always be daddy's little girlWww@QuestionHome@Com

luv it

i can sooooooo relate with my annoyin little sis Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very good!. I'm crap at poetry!. :]Www@QuestionHome@Com