Youuuuuuuu liiiikey?

Question: Youuuuuuuu liiiikey!?

Who's that guys!? She's so fly!. These hoes want to be my wife!. They love my bright blue eyes!. The way I strut got them hypnotized!. Shake that *** girl, move them thighs!. Wiggle them a little like your hips don't lie!. Yeah baby what you cooking!. I'm really, really, really good looking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

poetry comes from the soul, not the dick, just fyi!.

it was honestly pretty dreadful, because:

1) you copied the line "your hips dont lie" from a song!.
2) girls are not just hos or sex toys, we're ppl (can we say sexist!?)
3) this is so annoying because its just bragging about you, and it doesnt really have any meaning beyond that shallow one!.
4) maybe in rap deliberately using bad grammar sounds good but you posted this under the poetry section, not the rap one, so!.!.!.
5) most of the rhymes didnt even rhyme, really!.

keep working on it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was pretty horrible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com