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Question: Who would do something so wrong to someone so right!?

Nothing Left Behind

You touched her
Tortured her
Turned her in two
Then she grew up
And threw up
Her hands with no hope
In sight
To darkness
So dark light locked out
All who cared
She shared nothing
But the shame
Blame in herself
Less the child should grow
To never know
To ever know
Love as it should be

It's not what you took
But what you left behind

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now you made me cry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Plainly spoken!. Forgiveness isn't needed for the narrator of a truth, but for the right one unto whom the wrong was done!. In the heart there is no space for present happiness until forgiveness takes place!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The criminal should be asking for forgiveness not you!. You are speaking up for the victim, which is much needed!.

Bless you, and your words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What an impactive writing this is!.
I am quite in ore of the feelings stirred up in myself!.




You certainly know how to hit the note Hydro!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This stirs emotions in the dark!.

Please do not apologise for speaking what needs to be said!.

I see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is said well, sadly, but said well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You need not ask for forgiveness!. This is what poets do!. Tragedy makes great poetry!.
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