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Question: Please speak honestly of what u think of this(rate it)!.!.!.
A gift from the heavens
It feels just like yesterday when the heavens sent u down, to this place that we live on, but some wish could be free from!.!.
I hope u r just as sweet when u r older, cause the world ain't so sweet!.!.!.
U r truly a gift from heaven, that makes me grin 24/7!.!.!.
I love u I love u I love u!.!.!. truly i do!.!.!.
I pray u grow to be a loving compassionate person, cause God the creator of this earth wants his children like ur self to love one another, no matter what happens!.!.!.
So I pray, pray for u, cause I love u
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its sweet, but on a poetic scale i give it like a 5Www@QuestionHome@Com
sorry, but text-speak is NOT the english language!. It's phone speak and innappropriately used any other time!.
That said, the poem isn't very good!. If it wasn't for the "u's"
(there's 10 of them in this short piece) there wouldn't be much said at all worth the read!.
I do understand what you are trying to convey, but it is said poorly in this piece!. I wouldn't give it more than a 3!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I would give it an 8
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