I can't do it, how can you?

Question: I can't do it, how can you!?

A sloping mug
turns north
the fertile bug
leaps forth
the coffee man
turns his head
the frying pan
sizzles red
a yelping dog
a tired eye
the creeping fog
the rhyming lie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Buk,

I think you are a crafty old devil in giving us this seemingly jumble of phrases!. It reminds me of the Boy Scouts "Orgainized chaos"!.

RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com

Elemental is not the same as elementary!. If you take the root out of tune, what have you got!? I like this very much, an exercise in exploration!. In my rhymes, I rely on the fact that I am both deaf and blind!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There's a bug in my coffee and the dang dog won't shut-up beggin for breakfast!.That sounds like buisiness as usual around here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A criminal, faces the camera
A frog jumps off
A cafe owner moves back
You end up in more danger
A warning siren
wakes you
morning breaks thru the night
A poet sleeps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmmm, that's interesting!. Somebody better go check on the dog!. Great poem, Buk!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what is mug!? how it slope north!? this to much show-off but no meaning

me bored!.

me think maybe you write pome with point!. this like banging on drum with no rhythmWww@QuestionHome@Com

I liked both rhyme and metre, and also the prophetic sense to your poem!. It made a very good read this morning, at least to my foggy old head!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i can do the mug thing, but i don't think training the dog and frog would be that easy!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm so dumb
this verse
leaves me numb
I curse
and read again
still no clue
morning din
coffee due
though you did
make a point
seems hid
need a joint!.

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All rhymes lie to some extent!. This is why the reader of poetry must search for hidden meanings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cool!. Nice one!. Whoa, puff, puff, pass!. Here ya go ma!. LMFAOWww@QuestionHome@Com

you have written it by your own!. if yes the you cant become a good poetry writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Isn't that a bit elementary for youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Dr!. Suess use to make up words so the ryhme didn't elude! Www@QuestionHome@Com

There was a young man from Nantucket!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just do it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

just pass me the bong!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.will ya!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com