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Question: Have you ever bumped your heads on the clouds!?
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Floating on clouds
I'm allowed
To breath for once
And forever
To never again
Go under
From the weight
Of the black thunder
That buried me
Carried me so far
Down but not!.!.!.
All the way
And floating
I rise above
It all
This view is glorious

I don't ever want to look down again

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Seeing that clear blue, are ya!? Cloud tops are the only reason to fly!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The feeling of peace is overwhelming - to be far from the mundane trials of the earth!. If only !.!.!.!. we did not have to return!. If only !.!.!.!.!.!. the assaults do not - once again - over take us!. If only !.!.!.!.!. we can continue to carry - this dream - to the end of our days!. If only !.!.!.!.!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice poem Hydro!. It`s funny because I was just looking at the clouds wondering, and I have issues with bills, so I was thinking what if we could live on clouds; Would we have to pay rent!?lol

Anyway then I come online and you have a poem that says have you ever bumped your head on clouds, so yes I did, just now wondering about rent! Ouch that hurt!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Exceptionally unique and wonderfully written!. It seems the poetry reveals this was a beautiful day and a feeling of freedom from the weight of the world for this poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this one!.
Bumped my head on a cloud!? No!.
But once while riding an open helicopter in bad weather, I did barf into the clouds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cloud #9 or #49! Ah, yes swinging from a star is fun too, But I keep a parachute handy, incase I'm up too high!.

Uplifting, neat poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful! Here, on certain, special days!.!.!.the mountains tower over the clouds! So, if we are up on one of those mountains!.!.!.we can certainly bump our heads!.!.!.and have!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like viewing the cloudtops!. Sights unseen 100 years ago!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very spiritual!. Keep this up and soon you will be far beyond Earth's atmosphere!.Www@QuestionHome@Com