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Question: What do you do when you see it happen right before your eyes!?

Flight 61 --Moscow

When I saw you smile
At the little child
In line!.!.!.Somehow
You remind
Me!.!.!.Of the magic
Albeit tragic
That you possess
Yes, I confess
It's best
I let go
But I thought you should know
I felt it
My heart melted
As the little child in you
Broke through and
Showed the beauty
Who you are

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Lovely sentimental recollection in poetic form!. Excellent work!.!.!.great use of rhyme and descriptive language!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem brought back a memory from 9 years ago!. I had this really tough friend; She was so tough she fought with boys, and she was a good fighter!. (we were 18 at that time)

Alot of people feared her, and one day (when I use to smoke pot) I saw the kid in her!. I saw that broken child, the soft feminine girl in her, and it broke my heart!.

I always have this gift; the gift to find a way to see through a person!. Anyway I never told her, but it was her inner broken spirit, that made her seem so tough on the out!

Anyway Hydro, I agree with the others, you have a way with all of us on here; with your words you pool things from within us!.

And we relate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hydro, T'is you who have the magic,
Every word,so lovingly penned,
You truly know how to amend,
All thats Dark within our thoughts,
Words you write,
From the heart,
You will always be a part,
Of me!.
In things you see,
That I see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The ideas that you see and pen are truly a wonderful gift!. You found a new way to echo and show the wonders of a mystery within a mystery!. Wonderfully written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The child in me
the child in you
is seen, each time
we take the time
to look and see!.


Kudos! Hydro, this one is a heart melter, purity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is simply marvellous!. I was there looking over your shoulder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You done well here!. You many now go to first class!. Oh wait!.!.!.where's the pilot!? My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is difficult to make me feel amazement or wonder at a poem!. You have done so this time!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Priviet!.!.!.

This is greatness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

transformation, even transfiguration by a smile!.
my heart melts as well!. Thank you so much!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent! We've all had those magical moments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com