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Question: Are you half the man your father was!?
DNA
What's your sign
By design I'm benign
But I resign my mind
To align in the confine
Of divine prevention
My contention
That my intention
Of reinvention passes convention
To agitated suspension with
Linear attention directing me
Perfecting me while inspecting the vaults
Deflecting the faults selecting to aim
For sure of nothing in this war of birth
Right I fight no end in sight
My plight to rearrange cells
I'm trapped in
This hell
I'm wrapped in this well
I'm tapped in too!.!.!.
I am half of you
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would have to strive greater to be half the man that my Dad was! He was my hero! God rest his soul!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Extremely clever, and a joy to read!.!.!.!.I must try something like this!.!.!.I'm a bit bored to-day!. (it isn't only the rappers who can extract every inch out of rhyme sounds, obviously) Read aloud it is such fun (and yet it also has a serious point to make)
I particularly like the inspecting the vaults/deflecting the faults -lines
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Half way through I'm saying, "Wow!" This is like a twister in my brain!. I've just got to find time to visit my thesaurus in order to find words to describe the beauty and uniqueness of this writing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well, sniff, since I'm female!.!.!.no!. However!.!.!.have inherited his ability to work with furniture and do-it-yourself projects!. Otherwise, I'm like my mother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Clever, but also a message contained within the rhymes!. Are you now a half timer!? I like!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are definitely in the running for "2nd Best Poet on Yahoo!"!.!.!.heehaw!Www@QuestionHome@Com
No I'm not!. I wouldn't want to be either!. He really has a lot of problems!. Www@QuestionHome@Com