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Question: Could you rate my poem on a scale of 1-10!?
Blood shot eyes
And smeared mascara
Telling lies
To avoid you
It’s not really true
Buy that’s just life
All alone
Up in this room
With no one to hold me
And call me there own
Welcome to paradise
Telling lies to avoid you
It’s not really true
But that’s just life
Welcome to paradise
It’s your home sweet home
Away from home
Here you’re happy ending
Welcome to paradise
Blood shot eyes
And smeared mascara
It’s no lie
That in the end you die Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
5!. And the entire 5 points is based on the fact that you actually seem to have some lyrical talent!. However, your subject matter rates a 0!. When it is all tragedy and tears, it seems self serving and shallow!. So as a writer, you have something, but you need to snap out of the oh poor me black winter phase!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
In one word!? Cliched!. It sounds as if you've just pulled lines from every other emo poem written and smashed them together in some random order!. Repetitive and self-gratifying!. Not to mention the rhyming over "eyes" "lie" and "die" is overused!. I give it a 2!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The worst! 1 point out of any given number! u may be a cute person with a nice heart but ur terrible wiritng makes u seem worthless! haha!
KIDDING, big time!. i actually knw about five pppl who wuld just LUVE you! i'll introduce u 2 sum HOT girls who LUV hot guys like u!
ooh!. Steve!. ;)
Good luck, artist teen!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's good rather sad maybe a 7 would be better with spelling corrected!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its a 6 or a 7 but it needs to be longer!.!. and it just suddenly ends!.!. the ending needs 2 be slower and more passionateWww@QuestionHome@Com
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who cares about spelling its only answers
very sweet kinda free style poem
ohh great no that stupid speach bubble thing says i have to much punctuationWww@QuestionHome@Com
I'd give it a 8!.
I like the creativity and the mixed style you choose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
7!.5Www@QuestionHome@Com
8!.5 :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
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TEN! It's so!.!.!. MCR-ish!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'll give it a 7 or 8!. I thought it was great, keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Graet, 7/10Www@QuestionHome@Com
10, maybe a million actually!. that was very well written!!!! good job!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
deffiantely a 10! keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com
7!.83737292837393819373839383938382 !.!.!.round it off to an 8Www@QuestionHome@Com
Correct some of the spelling and I would give it an 8!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
that was really good!. 9!.5
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its very depressing i give it a 7 and a halfWww@QuestionHome@Com