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Question: Tell me what you think its a thank you poem for a mentor!.
I am planning to write this on the side of a thank you card
for an old friend of mine helping me bring my confidence back like an older sister!.

Thank you for watching me
for when i could not see

Thank you for telling me
i am what i can be

Thank you for bringing back
what i thought went out the door

Thank you for its my potential
I thought i never sawWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The last couplet is awkward!.!.!.!.

Thank you for revealing my potential
that I never knew or saw!.

Thank you showing me my potential
That I never saw before

I'm sure your friend will be delighted that you have gone to the trouble of creating this verse for her (much more personal than a tradtional Thank You card)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its very good!. But according to me feelings can be best put forward in the form of a blank verse poem!. But its all in a poets individuality, and will to write what he wants!. I am sure she will love it!.
cheers to a wonderful poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

If they are mentoring you to win the Pulitzer, then it's going to need some help!. If you just want to say, "Thank you" then it is very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

so sweet! It would work really well on the card =D
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