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Question: Please rate my poem 1-10!.
Can you hear me god
I have to ask you a simple question
“Why am I like this!?”
“Why is the world so cold!?”
People hurt one another without a care
People hate for no reason
I’m alone no one cares
I cry and scream no one hears
“Why am I like this!?”
“Why is the world so cold!?”
Please god answer my prays
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you express yourself perfectly!. i give it a 10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

7!.5 a nice effort for sure

Just a thought,,, since you are repeating the two questions again at the end,,, why not remove the last line and insert "Can you hear mr god !?" in it's place !?

"Please god answer my pray(er)s" could then be inserted after line 5

just a thought, and it really may not be a viable one!.
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if i had a dime
for every time
i heard a crappy poem
about someone depressed
i would have a **** load of dimes

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7, I love the repetition and the questions!. I think perhaps some more intense imagery would help it reach a 10!. But over all very nice!. keep on writing!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its a little on the downer side but its real, your real emotions and i like that!. Id give it a 7!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is it a poem or a prayer!. Well, anyway its great 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com

6!.5Www@QuestionHome@Com

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That is a really nice poem! I rate it a 9Www@QuestionHome@Com

very touching poem
9!.5
ok ok
10
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it's great !.10Www@QuestionHome@Com

sweet!.!.!.i give it an 8Www@QuestionHome@Com