Cry cry cry
Cry cry Darling
I am not going to awake
Cry cry baby
You want love
No no
Tomorrow I go to work
Cry cry honey
It is 3 o’clock in the morning
Cry cry hubby
Turn your back
And have a nap
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Cry cry Darling I am not going to awake Cry cry baby You want love No no Tomorrow I go to work Cry cry honey It is 3 o’clock in the morning Cry cry hubby Turn your back And have a nap Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it sorta reminds me of the song how i could just kill a man by charlotte sometimes!. cry baby cry baby cry!. btw is your poem about doing the nasty!? haha but besides that its fine, needs more though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |