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Question: I wrote poem!. Have a look!.
I used to write a lot!.
How's this!. I just wrote it now!.


The fire, the good fire
The good orange warm fire
liberator of the sun's rays
communicating a star to me
oblivious
you would do it even if i weren't here
zen-like
you would pour your heat and light out into the cold universe
until there was silence
again
Just like me!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is a very good poem you should have kepted it going and making it kind of long but that was pretty good, but make a part 2 of it and keep it going some time good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wowo ur good!. really different and honest!. a good poem!!. very uniqueWww@QuestionHome@Com

Whoa! You have the talent for writing poetry!. That's nice!. ΓΌWww@QuestionHome@Com

goooooodWww@QuestionHome@Com

good!. Carry onWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's nice!.!. are you dedicating it to someone!?Www@QuestionHome@Com