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Question: What do you think of these God segments!? Do they make sense one at a time!?
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THE STYLE WAS

The meeting with God
seemed to last for hours,
Outside of the reality,
It was a blink of the eye!.

I wanted so badly to not be
enraptured by the moment,
But, as it turned out,
A moment was all I needed!.

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I read it as a Trigee!. I am not good at S2 in Trigees, but this seems to work for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yep, gotta love
those timeless magic moments!.
Sometimes I wonder
if in the second before you
die,
time goes sproiiiingggg
and becomes infinite in your head!.

Time is, after all,
very elastic!.
And fantastic!.
And totally relative!.
Especially when the relatives
come over to visit!.
Talk about time slowing down
to a snail's pace
in this case!.
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Yes they make sense one at a time!. This one, however, I had to read over slowly!. It seems to be going in a circle and I wanted to make sure I wasn't missing anything!. I especially like the "Outside of reality" line!. It threw me at first for I did not see the brilliance behind it!.

I was delighted greatly by this!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

And yet I am compelled to hold on, each and every line becoming a mystery within a mystery, wearing masks behind masks!. Meaning to be found!.!.!.or a delectable conundrum!. I am not sure; I quest anon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one does!. There is eternity in each moment!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Would it make sense as riddled!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
Short, brief and precise!.
nice piece of poetry!.
WELL DONE!
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