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Question: A seplotet (yes I got the idea from Evadne Terra)!. Do you like it!?
I really don't care it you hate it!. I just wanted to try one out!. It is kind of weird and I don't think I like it!. I don't know, make of it what you will!. Oh, and this has never happened to me, don't worry!.

Submission

I leave
the door
open for
you!.

You break it
down
and beat
me!.

If you hate it, that's fine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hey, no, I don't mind your asking, and I definitely don't hate this!. The only thing that is wrong with the form is that it's only supposed to be seven lines!. Try a rewrite like this!.

I leave
the door
open
for you!.

You break it
down
and beat me!.

Septolets are only supposed to be seven lines down, but you got the word count perfect!. also, the subject matter is chilling and cuts close to the heart of some people!. Picture perfect title as well!. Great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com