more or less,
pain of flesh!.
life's a living,
even when dying!.
nothing more to be said,
he's already dead!.
he died with a smile!.
had fun!.!.!. for a while!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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pain of flesh!. life's a living, even when dying!. nothing more to be said, he's already dead!. he died with a smile!. had fun!.!.!. for a while!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: very depressingly amazing!.!.!. i like it, though it made me sad!.!.!. very good!.!.!.claps to youWww@QuestionHome@Com How about on the fourth line fix it to even after dyingWww@QuestionHome@Com |