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Question: Another one of those heartbreak poems for those who haven't found anyone!. What do you think!?
It's written for women who have yet to find their husband, but can easily just be switched at the end and made for other scenarios!.

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All around me I see the epitome of what I desire
The gifts god has given, eternal love like a raging fire
I see happiness and the loss of so much fear
Knowing all I have are sadness and quite commonly tears
So unbearable, I try to hide, questioning my beliefs
And nobody’s running after me, nobody’s soothing my grief
Kisses and hugs and “I love you”’s send chills down my back
Because I know how bad that hurts to lack
I’ve wished and I’ve tried,
I’ve prayed and I’ve cried,
Yet I still sit alone and weak, waiting for my dream to come true
Hoping another person out there is waiting too
I try not to dwell, and I try to live my life
Wishing someday I’ll be somebody’s wife
To make happy, to trust, to love, to die for
To do all those things and oh so much more
I live for the day that I can say
“I love you” and not get turned away
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Its very nice, sensitive and emotional!. i think only a person truly in such a situation can write this!.

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