Outside
Oblivious to drowning
unconscious
illumination is inconsistent
thickening rime
covers the top of the icy walls that shield
oblivious to sunlight
outside them
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Oblivious to drowning unconscious illumination is inconsistent thickening rime covers the top of the icy walls that shield oblivious to sunlight outside them Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It is interesting and is thought provoking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |