Blue blue my rainbows are blue but though their there

Question: Blue blue my rainbows are blue but though their there

they're a secret amongst the blue sky, oh my love whare my bow in your hair, and let our hearts become as sticky as vanilla honey!. >>>>---wew----> diaryWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Er, well I'm just gonna think you want help re-phrasing it / making spelling and grammatical corrections!? If that's the case, here's the revised version:

''Blue, blue;
my rainbows are blue!.
But although there,
they are a secret amongst the blue sky!.
Oh my love,
wear my bow in your hair,
and let our hearts become as sticky as vanilla honey!."

I think it's a really pretty poem, but you made a huge leap from describing rainbows to your love, so I'm guessing the rainbows symbolize your love; it's secretive!? If that's the case, then maybe add something like 'as is my everlasting desire' right after the fourth line!.

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