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Question: Do you think this poem is good
COMPLICATIONS OF LOVE
I want to LOVE easy
I want LOVE to be easy
But LOVE is far from easy
too complicated 4 words
yet these words are flying from my soul
like a million restless birds
I want to uncomplicate LOVE
Make it simple
But thats almost impossible
because its always something like
I LOVE he but
He dont LOVE me
But LOVEs some she that dont LOVE he
Now everybody is confused as can be
From Complications of L!.O!.V!.E
LOVE is just to complicated
Too Complicated for me
But yet my LOVE for him surpasses even the deepest of seasWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I agree with jenny, I love it but it needs so work, try him instead of he because it'll sound right and instead of capitalizing, don't because the poem is about love just knowing it's about love makes it stand out!. not
LOVELOVELOVELOVE!.
You know what I mean!?
But other than that it's 10 stars, I love it makes total sense, I know what you mean!.
It was great!. Just a few tiny adjustments and you're all set!.
Keep on writing:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love it but it still needs some work Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com