Please comment on my poem.

Question: Please comment on my poem!.

I'm 14 yrs old and I've written this poem!.!.!.

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The sun was rising from the lap of the mountain
The little birds once again perched near the fountain
The rays of the sun painted the sky red
Asking us softly to leave our cosy beds
The sun rose slowly and kissed the fleeting clouds
The clouds blushed red and felt very proud
For the sun shone brightly resting in its bed
Wishing us gaily to have a great day ahead

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That's really good!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.wish i could write like that :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I have very interesing poem i like it
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I really liked it you should change a thing its great how you wrote itWww@QuestionHome@Com

lovely
bravo!.
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nice use of words!.
happy poem :)Www@QuestionHome@Com