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Question: I saw a horse today, and I remembered!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.do you remember the past!?

He always knew
when it was Christmas Eve!.
It was in the way he walked, the way
he looked at you when you put your hand
on his neck
and told him he was a good ol’ boy!.
He would nuzzle
your shoulder just a little bit harder
and see things just a little bit better!.
His coat was always
whiter and brighter
on Christmas Eve!.
He also stood
much higher, towering over you,
waiting for his ride!.
Everything looked and felt
just a little bit different on those Christmas Eve’s
long ago and that old white horse knew it,
and when you called him out
and said “Come on Blizzard,
let’s go on a ride” he would make
that unmistakable horse sound,
a low whinny that was soft and excited
and strangely human!.
The other horse usually knew something
was happening,
but he didn’t know it like Blizzard knew it!.
He was just along
for the ride,
happy to be part of the group!.
My father told me that Blizzard
knew what day it was, the eve of the birth
of Christ,
and as a child, I just accepted that
and never
doubted it and to this day
I still
believe!.
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All kidding aside Buk, the imagery that springs forth is as crystal clear in my mind as though I had been standing there!. I can feel the chill of my toes, the crunch of the snow, see the white of exhaled breath!. Both Blizzard's and a boy's!.

Well done sir, well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Being the animal lover that I am it touched my heart and drew me back to my own childhood!. Yes, I always remember the good and touching moments of my life and so many involve my sweet pets long gone!. !. They're etched in my heart always!. As for Blizzard, I'm not surprised!. Did you forget that the animals talk on Christmas Eve!?!.!.Shhh!. that's the time to listen!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! does that ever make me nostalgic and long for that better time!. We didn't have as many conveniences, had to physically work harder, had to use a little more common sense!. Families actually interacted and talked!. They didn't "Need" TV, Radio, phones were basically necessities, and not toys!. Gas was cheaper, groceries cheaper, cars cheaper, money was scarcer, but went farther!. I sure miss them 'Good old days!."

Thanks for a trip down memory lane!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A few years back used live in Idaho! One year around Christmas time we went to this auction and bought 3 horses!. We used to ride bare back and we would feel the crunch on the horses back as the chill of the snow would melt on the horses back and then freeze again!!Ahhh Memories, thanks for that !!CheersWww@QuestionHome@Com

~~Aloha and Thank-You for the HUGE tug at my heart!.!.!.growing up I used to ride my Dapple-Grey Arabian (Jude) every day of our Christmas Break frrom school!.!.!.you really took me back to those Crisp Quiet Winter days when it was just him and I enjoying the Beauty surrounding us as we rode in the perfect clean mountain air!.!.!.how I wish my kids could be raised in such a Simple Beautiful Time!.~~Again,T/Y Michelle~~Www@QuestionHome@Com

Our old horse was named Smokey!.!.!.he was dapple grey in the summer, nearly white in the winter!. He always made sure we got home!. He loved Kool-aid!. We put it in a pail of water!. He was in single harness; didn't get along well with others!. Never let us down!. Thanks for the memories!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Okay, I'm crying!.!.!.!.

You may never, in fact, have been raised around horses!.!.!.!.but your ability to make US believe you did is phenomenal!. As Benn said, you took us there, we felt it, and now I, too, know Blizzard, who stood tall and KNEW!

You know I believe!
maWww@QuestionHome@Com

What an excellent Poem !!!,,A Poem which made me feel as though I was actually there with Blizzard in the cold crisp air,, the crunching of snow on the ground The sounds of Blizzard and other horses,,,,,, WoW!!!,,,,,,You made it feel real,,, Well Done Sir,,,Well Done,,,,,And believe,,, yes I doWww@QuestionHome@Com

Another home run, brother man!. I grew up in a city!. No horses,
no big red barn!. Right now, I want to move to the country,
so my children will have memories like that to draw from!.
Well done!. Very well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice memory from your past!.
I, too, have been remembering the past today!. What triggers these latent memories on this day, of all days!? Is it the Summer of our Remembrances!? Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is your best yet, Buk!.

It was bittersweet!.

Thanks and keep 'em coming!.

?Thanks for the memories?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excuse me Mr Buk, sir!

I have a fine patch of rhubarb at the bottom of my garden!.

Do you think Blizzard will poo in this bucket for me!?

;o)Www@QuestionHome@Com

good story of a child that loves the birth of Christ!. loved that one very much!. the horse and all animals know before we do when things happen!. thanks for sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com

There is something about Christmas Eve!. A Cessna flying overhead might really be Santa and his reindeer!. You can't be sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love animals, much more than people, i have to admit!. i can smell blizzard, and hear him!. it sorta gives me shivers!. *edit*in a good way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Without trying to match your eloquence and articulate ways!.!.!.

I will always and continue to believe!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thatsa my kinda poem!. Well drawn images, a beginning, a conclusion, and a good story in between!. Well done sir!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes i see a horse and i remember the summers i had so much fun riding!.Its good to remember the good things in the past!. Thanks !.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That should be a children's book!. I am an artist along with all my pals!.!.!.!.!.why not get it published!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice!. I could almost feel the soft nose of the horse I had in my teens when I was reading that!.
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I do remember!.!.!.I do believe! Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Simply beautiful dear boy!. TY for making me remember the good things!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are the man, bro! I just read a quote about living a good life so we can live it a second time when we get old and look back!. May yours be the best! peaceWww@QuestionHome@Com

A great story, with genuine humanity, or is that equinity!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i know meatsa!.!.!.!.i know!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely beautiful!.!.!.brings back so many memories!. Thanks for this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Animals just know,ty for the poem and may god bless you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very very nice not sad at all!. Yes I remember the past,most of it anyway!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can't stop reading this one, man you are so good!.
You steal my time with your words, they wont let me escape!.
Thanks Buk, I love it!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

beautiful!.!.!.i remember the past, and it makes me look forward to the future!.!.!.!.thanks!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am beyond words!.!.!.
Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com