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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like the poem i wroteQuestion: Do you like the poem i wrote my heart is so frozen
so stiff, not even the warmest hug can melt my frozen heart nore a fires strongest rays for you see you are the sun that melts my frozen heart and sets me free from this icy chamber and carry me to your heart witch is the warmest place to keep me ok hope you liked it :) Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: yuuppppppppppp its nice but saddWww@QuestionHome@Com Yea, its pretty poetic, really gud!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not good enough!.No offense but you need lots of practice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yeah it's good but just with a little rhyming would be perfect!Www@QuestionHome@Com its ok but trying adding some rhymingWww@QuestionHome@Com What a load of ****! HAHAAA!Www@QuestionHome@Com good startt =]]]] i liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com |