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Today is the start of a brand a new beginning
a reason for living
my destiny solved

No more prescriptions
I rise from depression
a change of direction
that I need to evolve

Happiness ain’t hard
it’s a new found sensation
with mind over matter
my fears start to fade

I now see through the chaos
of the everyday dreamers
to whom life is a prison
without chance of parole

To them there’s no reason,
no neat explanation
why the bubble they’re in
is becoming so small


But a free mind can save them
no need for salvation
with this new way of thinking
we will reach all our goals

With a positive reaction
to all life’s distractions
we’ll be ready and able
when destiny calls
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