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Question: Is this more than just words!?

Take Me With You

I go for peace
Yet come home in
Pieces broken
Torn
Worn down
But not in the ground

I face the faces
I get the look
You’re off the hook
Look what they took
From us all

Heaven you go
This hell
All I know
As I try to find a way
To make it go away

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Have a star from a vet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This needs to be in every VA facility and the Oval office; and in the offices of all the heads of state in the world!. Thank you, H!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a tristful but very appreciative look at those men and women who fight overseas for their country, for all of us!. Very powerful perspective!. I especially love the first stanza with its play on words!.!.!.very effective!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it
it sounds like someone is presenting there feelings in a poem so they dont directly tell someone and feel stupid about whatever the answer or question!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As Ever your Words are so meaningful!.
Somehow you have the nack of making me very very sad!.
I Guess that's real Poetry for you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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this is a really good piece, i like it, and its not just wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Accept what is if one can't change it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com