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Question: My revision-Ever feel like you one step from being replaced!?
Understudy

This is nothing new;
Been here times before-
Mouths move to speak
to material familiar!.

Breath into lines
A dramatic pause; an interjection
The applause light searing,
rallying in motivation!.

The understudy takes the stage-
Awkward in motions
The cast throws encouragement
With scripted emotion

A smile and a wink
With the usual zeal
Everyone loves a loser
Its part of the appeal

Firmly against the grain
still playing the part
Lacking in composure
yet so full of heart

Just for the moment,
You’ll share in the production!.
Until the real actors,
are quickly inducted

So reserve all the pep!.
This is all just pretend!.
Here from the beginning-
fully know how it ends!.



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"Hi!",

I just went to compare it with your original one!. But can't seem to find it!. But I do remember reading it!.
I think it all flows great!.
Just a suggestion for L22 (You’ll share in the production!.) maybe take the (in) out!. Than it will all flow perfectly!.

Written well, we all at some point can sympathize with you!.
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That was a sad poem; the subject experienced being unappreciated!. You put lots of feelings into it!. You write with pain!. I thought it was good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think you should listen to this song!.!. i like it by the way!. really good and stuff!. yah!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ain't that the truth!. Good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com