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Spiritual Autopsy
By Semper Fi Reborn
You've been rushed by ambulance
To an emergency room
Filled with light
Sound and feeling
Your head is reeling
Someone yells CLEAR
As scripture is read
For Soul Pulmonary Resuscitation
One-one thousand, Two-one thousand,
FLATLINE
You cling to the world
You crave the life of the world
Instead of the life that God wants for you
Thankfully it's not too late
For you to have a Spiritual Autopsy
Placing your sins in the obituary
Placing you in SanctuaryWww@QuestionHome@Com
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A breathlessly hard hitting start and a thoughtful, sensitive end!.!.!.I love this!. The concept of "spiritual autopsy" is innovative and meaningful!. So many of your poems are spiritually enlightening!. I appreciate that!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The rebirth - to survive a near death experience - to be totally aware (later on - of course) that you had been given additional time on this earth!. For what great reason - do you ask!? For all extensions must have a reason!? ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
A most original look at what so many have written about (if I say so myself)!. Loved the happy ending!. Reminds me of the Aztec's Filth Eater--Tlazolteotl!.
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Wow! Beautiful, thought provoking work!.
If only everyone had that last split second to choose!.
God bless! <><Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful! It reminded me of John Donne's spiritual obsession with anatomies!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice message!.!.!.but accomplishment of execution!? Mmm! You religious then!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Thought this was really great love the twist in the end wasn't expecting that! Cheers !!Www@QuestionHome@Com
undescibingly beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You have said it all!. The message must be read aloud in Church!! I mean it, talk to your Pastor!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You're a born preacher, Semper!
you could tempt me into a church with this one!Www@QuestionHome@Com
why so negative!?Www@QuestionHome@Com