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Question: What do you think of this paragraph of my poem!?
I thought I knew everything!.
I was wrong of course!.
Heart is aching!.
Feels like I'm off my path!.
Fore the guy I thought I knew turned out to be someone I didn't want to know!.
My mind was playing tricks on me making him seem like I wanted him to be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
With all due respects, I found this stanza to be very predictable, but I like your non-abstract approach to the language!. I think this stanza could benefit greatly from a little more creative imagery and symbolism!.Www@QuestionHome@Com