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Question: Is this poem good!? I think it is!!
My friend wrote this!.!.its good!.!.what do you think!?

I'm sorry to say
I'm not myself today
I can't explain
Why i'm in so much pain
Everything seems so wrong
and life seems too long
My hearts is aching
Its empty and breaking
And your too blind to see
That I just want to be freed
From this world full of hate
With my hopeless fate
And be able to be
Just me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
ur friend is so good=P
i really like it !Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it's beautiful!.!.!. and i love it!.!.!. i would never ever steal a precious like so just to let you know!.!.!. hey, i'm a poet and i didn't know it!!! hahahaWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's good

the best poems
are the poems have rhymes

just continue making poems
you'll make it better!

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Yeah !. !. !. It's not bad at all!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itt!.
i think it's really good!.
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I think it's excellent! She's good at poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it a lotWww@QuestionHome@Com