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Question: Yet another one of my poems!?
This is one that I wrote a while back!. It's another one based on love, but I think that in the end it brings out the best, showing how devotion and dedication sometimes are all it takes!. Just wanna hear thoughts (constructive criticism only please no one needs unwarranted insults)
I call this one Weeping Beauty


Weeping beauty weeps
Like Sleeping beauty sleeps
When true love comes to call
The curse shall fall!.
However long it takes
How much pain it makes
Waiting on the only one
Waiting for the sea of darkness to see sun
One day my prince shall comeWww@QuestionHome@Com


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your poem made me smile, and its so true !.!.!.!. thanks for sharing itWww@QuestionHome@Com

You shouldn't tie up your chances for happiness in gaining romantic love!. Go out and do something meaningful in your life, instead of waiting around for a "prince!." It'll do wonders for your self-esteem!. No man can make you you!.

Love is wonderful, but try to learn to love yourself!.

Feminism: try it out!. It's healthy!.

This is meant kindly, just so you know!. I have problems with the ideas expressed in your poem, but that doesn't mean there's anything wrong with you!. Those ideas have the allure of being "romantic," and we all wish for a fairy-tale life sometimes!. But think about it: would you really have respect for yourself if all you ever did was wait to be loved!? If all you ever were was someone's wife!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is beautiful!.!.!.!.because it is YOUR poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was pretty bad tbhWww@QuestionHome@Com

hmm!.!.I do like the other one!.!.better!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com