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Question: I'm 10,what do u think of this poem!?
Have you ever sailed the sea on a dim lit summer's night!? Or danced with the devil beyond the glowing moons lihgt!?Have you ever danced in a field on a stary winter's evning!? Have you ever cryed in the ocean apon a beautiful sunset!.Have you ever let go of life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Thats an amazing poem for a 10 year old to write!. Especially the fact that you made such an excellent poem with so few lines!. Great job!.
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If I had let go of life - I would not be here - to answer your question!. Suggestion: even though - you are only 10 - I think it would be wise - to spell check your words!. If you are old enough to use them - you should know how to spell them!. also - language is used widely in expressing ideas!. If you learn one new word a day - from the dictionary - it will help you in your writing!. Keep up the good work ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

superb!.!.!. excellent!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful! Well done!. You have talent!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't think those things let my life go, but more my concentration, or focus!. Www@QuestionHome@Com