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Love’s Lyric

Some say love, it is a brine,
To swim across its hadals is divine,
Others claim love, is like a river,
With flows of dulcet nectar stirring you a shiver!.


Lots state love, it makes you blind,
They’re real Perfection, one of their kind,
Some cite love to be great fire,
Out of this dimension, one spark ignites endless desire!.



I say true Love, it is a treasure,
Sometimes, hidden ocean deep in a lone river,
At times, it burns you softly with its ways of pleasure,
Raising your heartbeat, with a slight fever!.

True love, it always lies at heart and spirit,
For however blind, however deaf,
One thing you never cease to feel, it is love’s lyric!.
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I loved it! It flowed beautifully, and was well-thought out and somewhat mysterious!.!.!.but not so much that the reader might lose interest!. Great job!.!.!.keep writing!!

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It reminded me of the song which I cannot remember the title of -- Some say love -- it floats as a melody on air!. I love the poem!.
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Beautiful!.!.!.!.!.really really beautiful!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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that was great! I loved all the metaphors and such, keep writing your good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com