Critque My Poem The world of love is sweet?

Question: Critque My Poem The world of love is sweet!?

When your eyes and my eyes meet
When your hands and my hands touch
When you and I get closer
When our spirits intertwine
When we feel joy and splendor
Torrent happiness and pleasure
Our hopes and dreams
that these moments
engrave in time
and for me and you last for everWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Yeah!. alot of mirroring!. It is beautiful!.lol!.
I think we have quite the poet here!. This is hot!. I do not know what mirroring is!. Proud of you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lot of mirroring, really relates to people!. Comprehensible!. Simple and direct!. Good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com