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Question: I'm 10, love writing sad poems!
Looking for a way!.Nothing left to say!.Life keeps getting in the way!.Travling through the cold countryside!.Shame is somthing she coulden't hide!.Loss of hope and loss of pride!.Nothing left to do nothing to look foward to!.Only trust the stars till you see no more!.Dye apon the beautiful moonlight!.To bad she had to dye!.What a shame she coulden't find a way!.Soul crushed and heart broken!.Drowned by her own tears and cut by her shaterd dreams!.THE ENDWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Okay, girl, this is absolutely amazing!.
THE END!.
;]
I write ones like these sometimes too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To Isaac F:
Ten-year-olds feel pain just like the rest of us!. And how old are you, Isaac F!? If you're a teenager, there are plenty of adults who would dismiss your pains as trivial!. When I was ten, I was deep in depression and being prescribed a different medication, for a different diagnosis, for the umpteenth time!. (Thankfully, I've been off psych meds for several years, and, other than being a geek for all the ages, I'm perfectly normal!. I have to thank my excellent therapist here, she's a gem of a person and a paragon of her profession!.) Not that I'm implying that punkrocker needs therapy, I'm just using my own strong example to prove that people of all ages have legitimate feelings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sad Poem:
Life isn't worth living
Without anything given
The feeling of stress
which is enough to make some feel depressed
having a broken heart
after someone's world is torn apart
People who drown in their tears
hiding their fears!.
To a person who didn't have to die
the family and friends had a need to cry!.
The feelings of sadness are true!.
it can hurt anyone including you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that's deep, and!.!.!. sad!.

But if you're 10 as in age
then what're you doing in here!?
you should be like 12 or 13 i don't remember!.!.!.
well
who cares!?
Me and my friends used to play around with toys, imagination and nature when we were 10
but I guess times change
and I don't think it's for the best
but I'm too lazy to talk about loss of innocence right now
well
just keep doing what you like
writing poemsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Try using Spell Check from now on!. And please start writing your poems in proper format!!! It will make them easier and smoother to read!. This one was actually pretty good!. I've read your other poems and I like this one the best!.
It's DIE!.!.!.!.not dye, SHATTERED!.!.!.not shaterd, and COULDN'T!.!.!.not coulden't! And in your 10th sentence it should be too and not to!.
And gee, you are pretty depressed for a ten year old!Www@QuestionHome@Com

hey, when i was a young girl in my preteen and teen years, I often wrote sad stories and lyrics!. The sadder the better! It is normal and means your hormones are acting up and you are on your way to puberty!.OR if it leads you to hurt yourself, thats not normal!.
So take care and write if you need someone to talk to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You must have had an experienced life - to have this much insight at 10!. You have a great talent - now you need to polish your skills - like spelling - and putting this prose into poetry format!. Here is a link that may help you with different types of poetry ?

http://www!.shadowpoetry!.com/resources/wi!.!.!.

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I dont want to dog you but I dont like it!. BUT I WILL SAY THIS, you have it in you!. It ust sounds funny to me because you are 10, what heart break could spawn such writing!? I guess since I am older than you I feel like what exactly does a 10 year old have to be sad about!? Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good, but what's the question!.

Someone please read mine
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have potential; create a style using stanzas and punctuation to really bring out the emotion and imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG!!!
you are like soooooooooo good you should get it published or something that one is really good!!!
wish i could write like that!!!:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i really like it!. you have talent (:
i like to write stuff like this too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey I love it, keep writing!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's really good!. I like that kind of poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was prtty good ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's really pretty, I ? it!

Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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