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This would be the day That he jumped from that bridge And tossed his soul away All because Of feeling so alone No mail in the box No one's on the phone Like a one man game of Hide and NO seek Yet he won't jump If one soul will just speak Smile and say hi to someone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Don't do it, I promise to send you more E Mails!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I re writ it!. He was going do it this time This would be the day That he jumped from that bridge And tossed his soul away Paddy worked it all out The distance from the bridge Down to the river bottom To the nearest inch!. He carefully selected The rope from his supply!. Elastic stretch forgotten Paddy sentenced him to die!. From parapet did he plummet down to the river bed Bungee elastic followed He landed on his head Oh Fook ole Paddy shouted!. I forgot the stretch again still he must have died outright rather than in pain!. The Moral of the story if you should Bungee jump make sure you test the kit first Dont trust some Irish chumpWww@QuestionHome@Com Well!.!.!. maybe he would have an angel named Clarence to help him find his joy in life!. But frankly, *I* would not be knowing all that by merely looking at him on the bridge!.!.!. he may, instead be!.!.!.!. Contemplating the lovely day To see the ripples wash away Any cares and woes that he may feel Or any wounds that he may heal!. The birds dip and sip along the shore The sun sparkles off the morning's hore!. His lungs drink in the day's freshness His eyes contemplate his blessedness!. Turning from the bridge's rail His smile speaks of a tale Of happiness and heartfelt bliss Remembering his lover's kiss!. Have a blessed day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yep I embrace the miserable because we are all in the same sinking boat and i liked how you had it reach out to someone without ultimately taking his life at the end i have poems about suicide and it is something I do not think anyone should partake in it's one catergory once you fall in you cannot change what is done RIP JuanWww@QuestionHome@Com Great Message in the poem! We don't realise the truth that a smile and hi we say to someone could make such a great difference in their life!. Solitude is such a horrible thing tempting and driving people to suicide!. A voice, a smile is so comforting!. I know it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com ,Your poetry was touching and well written, with a sincere message! One never knows what a word will bring, comfort to restore some tiny trace of hope, that someone actually cares! Beautifully done and thanks for sharing a heart felt message like this!! Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com I would!. Infact I did once before not to long ago!. And just because I said hi to her we became the best of friends and now she has no intentions of these types of things any more and she's my girlfriend!. By the way the poem was amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I would speak to them regardless, despair is a universal language we can all understand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yes i guess that's pretty good poetry!.!. it seemed to have a themeWww@QuestionHome@Com very powerful message, and words worth listening tooWww@QuestionHome@Com hell yeah! if it'll save a life, and even more if he makes good conversation!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com yes I would try toWww@QuestionHome@Com you make a good point! thanks that made my day!Www@QuestionHome@Com |