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Question: Help me finish my poem!? :)!?
She's falling for his gypsy curse
it's just like love but the reverse
and when it ends, she'll have it too
the curse that came with loving youWww@QuestionHome@Com


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I would keep it there but in this lins
"it's just like love but the reverse"
For "the reverse"change it to "in reverse" Good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

if you mean converting the words to sound like a song then I CAN lovely poem by the way FABULOUS i have the same probs email me if you want mi help dont change a word in that poem and KEEP writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

paths we ll share,
don't care,
every day a new door to beware,
only you have the key to care,
open my heard,
and you ll find a world,
reach your hand,
to see the new land,
its you, its me,
and!.!.!.!.its FREE!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, put it on myspace or facebook and ask for someone to make it a song!. Good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com

all the love that comes with this
overwhems me as I'm bewitched
no can i have a bologna sanwichWww@QuestionHome@Com

I personally think it's good as is!. And poetry isn't something that you really think about; it kind of just flows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

verrry good!. r u good with music!? could be a song aye!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Forever, foever I will be true,
to you, to you babe only you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh wow, that's nice! I don't think it needs anything else!. You could put that on your myspace or something!. Maybe make an avatar out of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

youve already finished it
you need a middleWww@QuestionHome@Com

U got talen girl!. U have an amazing start, i say keep on goin :) Good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com

and here is where the poem for you
ends here and no moreWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's fine it doesn't need anything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its rlly nice
i dont think it needs anythig else:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it the way it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats actually good! to tell the truth i think you dont need to add anything!!! nice work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you could end it there and it will be find

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like the first answer!!that was pretty good!!!^^Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it the way it is :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i don't think you need to add anythingWww@QuestionHome@Com