She's falling for his gypsy curse
it's just like love but the reverse
and when it ends, she'll have it too
the curse that came with loving youWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> Help me finish my poem? :)?Question: Help me finish my poem!? :)!? She's falling for his gypsy curse
it's just like love but the reverse and when it ends, she'll have it too the curse that came with loving youWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I would keep it there but in this lins "it's just like love but the reverse" For "the reverse"change it to "in reverse" Good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com if you mean converting the words to sound like a song then I CAN lovely poem by the way FABULOUS i have the same probs email me if you want mi help dont change a word in that poem and KEEP writingWww@QuestionHome@Com paths we ll share, don't care, every day a new door to beware, only you have the key to care, open my heard, and you ll find a world, reach your hand, to see the new land, its you, its me, and!.!.!.!.its FREE!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it, put it on myspace or facebook and ask for someone to make it a song!. Good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com all the love that comes with this overwhems me as I'm bewitched no can i have a bologna sanwichWww@QuestionHome@Com I personally think it's good as is!. And poetry isn't something that you really think about; it kind of just flows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com verrry good!. r u good with music!? could be a song aye!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Forever, foever I will be true, to you, to you babe only you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh wow, that's nice! I don't think it needs anything else!. You could put that on your myspace or something!. Maybe make an avatar out of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com youve already finished it you need a middleWww@QuestionHome@Com U got talen girl!. U have an amazing start, i say keep on goin :) Good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com and here is where the poem for you ends here and no moreWww@QuestionHome@Com it's fine it doesn't need anything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com its rlly nice i dont think it needs anythig else:)Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it the way it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com wow thats actually good! to tell the truth i think you dont need to add anything!!! nice work!Www@QuestionHome@Com you could end it there and it will be find i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com i like the first answer!!that was pretty good!!!^^Www@QuestionHome@Com i love it the way it is :)Www@QuestionHome@Com i don't think you need to add anythingWww@QuestionHome@Com |