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Question: Will you be mine!?
Why Can’t We Be Friends
I will agree that we disagree
That makes neither better than thee
For you to be you and me to be me
Is so clear yet we are too blind to see
I say yes and you say no
I go to and you go fro
You like rain and I like snow
You say how and I say so
When we both are laid to rest
Will you say that you were best
Or will I give in and acquiesce
Either way we failed the test
If I can't seem to make amend
And to me you must condemn
One last thought to you I send
We both now have lost a friend
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sometimes you just have to let go, especially when it seems you have done everything to make it work-If you put all the cards on the table and still cannot come to resolution it cannot be!.
It will only lead to resentment and bring you both downWww@QuestionHome@Com
Afew things went through my mind
on this poem
first Will you be mine!.
I think of Valentine's Day
Nextly Another title
Why can't we be friends
because this is a war of words
I like the first line I will agree we disagree
this is being honest!.
However
When I say stop you go
can the other person says can't
I like the rain but you like the snow
This is also about different things
like the rain or snow
Judging by the last line
it talks about the end of a friendship!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
So A friend you've lost,
Is that so!?
Why then did you not let me know!?
I Your Friend would Like to be,
If Dear Sir,you will agree!.
Of course if you would rather not,
Then with Grace and Charm
You may call me Ma-am,
I Bid thee Farewell,
and Toodlepip,
No doubt We'll pass on many
A Ship!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds like this relationship - is based on competition - rather than being complementary!. Neither person (evidently) was mature enough - to see the differences - as possibly being - beneficial to each other ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Trust is hard to retrieve, one has to prove it in action!.
whatever the reason, you always manage to write impressive
poems of feelings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
IMPRESSIVE I might say loved the 3rd stanza "When we both are laid to rest Will you say that you were best Or will I give in and acquiesce Either way we failed the test" THX for sharing a lovely thought provoking poem!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well penned, especially the last stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
and about time, too!. But you tried! you can't win over everyone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com