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The World of Heaven and Hell

In the World of Heaven and Hell
Everythng is always appropriate and well
For everything is parallel
And nothing is diffferent that we can tell
Our own parallel is the only one we see
In it are only folk like you and me
This is Heaven so we perfectly agree!
Not everyone's as perfect as we
We're permitted the illusion of a parallel to see,
Hell where everyone else is sent to dwell!.
By Jihad, Crusade, Satyagraha,
Perfect Dharma we strive (according to belief)
To save or victoriously quell the Infidel
Relieving them of life or ignorant grief,
Only on this particular string,
They likewise are doing!.
This is a world that's ideal!.
A world also expressed in need
The necessary parallel of greed,
Selflessness, and sharing that is real,
Brotherhood in place of bigotry!.
I'm sure that there's a string,
Parallel with all others, yet free
Where angels gather and together bring
The blessings and advances
From a Universe of chances
Humanity at last in diversity
Showing each other in and by love
The blessed, beautiful, warm, and smiling Face of God above!.
? July 17, 2008 Albert K!. Jungers All rights reservedWww@QuestionHome@Com


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