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Question: Anyone have any comments on this poem!?
High Risers

Fragmented words, thoughts, ideas
laid out on the paper in an organzized way
like puzzle pieces
and who knows what
they all say!.

Juts of this and cuts of that,
clear as mud and ceiling wax
a jumbled up mosh of confusion
but profusely proclaimed by critics!. Bravo!

But the ordinary man
in everyday life is blinded still
left hungry and thirsty for
that which would satisy
if only he understood the rules!.

So highminded are they,
adrift upon clouds of accolades
they forgot that words
could point the way
to salvation and hope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The mood of our era, power and greed, I hear you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like this, I'm surprised it has no comments!. The flow is very good and you are using unique images!. Great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com