What will you do when they figure you out?

Question: What will you do when they figure you out!?

I want to be
Big as a tree
So all can see
The wonderful me

The one in my mind
Who's right all the time
Never committed a crime
Who makes the words rhyme

There to correct others when wrong
Do prove to all that I was right all along
Make them listen to my pathetic little song
Anything just so I can stand out from the throng

But alas I fear that they see through the veil
That all of my words are tired and stale
To others in comparison I am pale
My soul is cheap and for sale
This scream now is a wail
Exposed I am so frail
Alas to no avail
Lost I derail
Now i ail
All hail
IanoWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

the bottom should match the spacing of the top!.!.!.and the pattern!.!.!.NoobWww@QuestionHome@Com

You let the twerps get to you, bad Hydro!

Take this power that you have and turn it toward something significant, something with gravitas!.!.!.say, women's breasts, for example, which your poem remarkably resembles anyway!.!.!.HA!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this is very clever - I bet it was quite difficult to achieve!.
the last stanza was particularly effective (affective!?!.!.I always get those muddled)!.!.!.!.!.as if he were disappearing down a drain!.!.!.!.!.So this is where he ended up!.!.!.!.!.at the bottom of a drain!? Hm!?

Where's my lovely picture gone!.!.!.!.!.A!Y what is happening to you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i wish i hadnt joined now if this is what passes for poetry round here what kind of guy would do such a thing!? a complete and utter tit of a guy if you ask meWww@QuestionHome@Com

Good job!. Looks like you flushed him down the toilet!. The
cesspool is actually a great big step up from where they come from!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really really like this!. It caught my attention, and I thought by the end there would be more!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, this is good, and neat to view, as well!.

But let him go, not worth the effort, attention feeds his ego!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nothing to figure out with me, nor is there for you!.Talented is what you are!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice, well said, well structured, and well !. !. !. well good job, sounds like Vincent Van Gogh's last therapy session!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this is wonderfully creative!.
I don't think your work is tired and stale at all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Let us all stop feeding into his ego!. This is exactly what he wants, the pathetic little creep (to put it politely)!. Put your talents to work; don't waste them on him!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A big Boob!? Creative and funny! Now get it covered!Www@QuestionHome@Com

honestly i thought it was a good poem!. 10/10 keep it up!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

my my, the insults fly,
Are you all so qualified,
Heed not dear, I am Here
to save you from this savage lot!.

Did I hear the lady say,
In such an eloquent way,
A name she called you I believe,

Or did my ears I Deceive!.
Temper Temper,
Dear Distemper,
Are you usually on here!?

Whats that you said,
OH, time for bed,
off you go then,
lest your late,

A bedtime tale,
if missed you'll hate!
Now come on chaps
you've had your fun,

You need your strength
so End round one!Www@QuestionHome@Com