Please read my Short Poem... ( =?

Question: Please read my Short Poem!.!.!. ( =!?

I have just started writign poems, i'm 15!. Do you like my poem!?

Eyes squinting in the light,
The thought of you, helps me fight,
Close to death, Can go fast and slow,
Will I survive, only time will know,
Bodies all around me, deep in thought,
Waiting for a miracle, looking distraught,
A Doctor with a tool, nearing my chest,
I’m going to win, must hope for the best
Awaking to the sounds, the voices I know,
I open my eyes, I sit up nice and slow,
I’m getting better, Spirits arise with relief,
Huddling around, there is everything but grief!.

(it is not based on a true story, i just made it up)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That is such a good poem!.

It is deeply profound

are you a professional or an amateur writer!? Becoz if your only an amatuer, I would honestly suggest you taking this art form further!.

It is really good and a pleasure to read!. Thank you

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i think you have done a great job but would suggest you write about issues that you can relate to or have experienced as that is what will attach the emotion to your poem and the reader will relateWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think it wass great
if i was to rate it from 0 thru 10 id
give you like a 9283474675654673433345

haha i really enjoyed reading it!.

Great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

triffic
heres one
you break my heart and u think its a game
your a bit young so u think "huh" your a pain
maybe i should of known u when you were older
and u wouldn't be so flippant
and jelous!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW, THAT WAS GOOD!. i wish i had that gift!. may God bless you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

verry good
applaud
clap clap clapWww@QuestionHome@Com

thats really good for a 15 year oldWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!. its sum what on the deep side!. good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow i am lost 4 words

that is wow

if u hadnt out that u were and amutur i would have never gest

keep goinWww@QuestionHome@Com

you been drinkin!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, very good for a 15 year old, keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com