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Question: Critique My Poem: Viola Hungry For Love!?
Viola is hungry for love
For sensuous pleasure
When her body shivers
With Joy and ecstasy
When lover have her treasure
Viola is master piece
Of quiet beast
She can devour her lover
Drain him from last drop of power
Viola you have to watch
With Her green eyes
With her ivory figure
Viola is a temple
For worship
To ascend heavenWww@QuestionHome@Com


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its pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com