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When gods collide
There's no winning side
Just fools praying
To the never-ending lies
Hypnotized by their empy promises
Accepting them as truths
How could two societys
Relize they've been duped
Suicide bombings
In the name of God
Watching the children
As they fall
Thoughtless puppet of the gods
Believeing their every word
Such is the folly of man
To follow what is not
The holy crusades
Their leader divine
They forget us
Who do not align
Athiesm such a sinful thought
Lest you become Agnostic
Tolerance a failed concept
When religion leads to death
It dawned upon me
My prophecies need fulfillment
Slay the breeders of the plague
Which infects the minds of peasants
I creep into the sacred halls
Seeking a god
Repentance he asks
Death he recieves
Slaying him for man's Destiny
Braindead leaders
Attempt to coverup
The lies and deciets
The walls fall around them
They are unclean
Toxins in the minds
Of the people have been cleansed
Free to think
Free to sin
Free to live their lives again
Freedom of Man
To rule the land
Without obeying
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hey!
Wow!. Your poetry, it really strikes!.
I wish I could be more descriptive, but take it as a compliment that I can't!. The moments of wonder and realization in life can never truly be described with words!. I mean that, I mean it's true that this is the internet, but well I know I mean it!. I have a myspace, but I haven't been on in ages, I'm on facebook though!? Do you have an email address!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love it, quite a poem! You put what i think on paper in such a beautiful way!
I hope this is the antidote for some readers, get rid of the poison that is religion!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I can see you have put a lot of work into this poem, but it is not my cup of tea!. I like lovely things and words!. I am sure
it is very good tho!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The first answerer talked about not liking this because she liked lovely things!.!.!.!.
well this is very lovely!.
Nice work!. It amazes me what talent some people have to create!. If I could give you a high five, lol, I would!.Www@QuestionHome@Com