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Question: A love poem!!?!!? is it good, about long distance relationship!?
I feel so trapped from where I stand
I finally came across a soul
That understands as well as I
But from miles away there is no point
You see my moon, you see my stars
We see together but not as one
For why did god let us meet
Only to find we can never touch
Why did I just have to say hi
For it to go on how it did
We watched together as chemistry formed
Now we realize what is here
A country apart, hearts so stubborn
Making their way in between us two
We stay up till dawn, so quiet so still
I still just wish I could walk with you
On the beach, the sunset in the horizon
Just staring into you deeply, in those eyes
I want to be where I can just kiss you
But we can not make a move
For are hearts are still to young and gentle
But the wait is worthwhile
I will just live on my life, dreaming of you
Until the day comes, to where I can love you
~jujuWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i luv it!!!
its exactly wat im goin thru
i miss him!! lol
ya its greatWww@QuestionHome@Com

no!. i think it sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that was GOOD! Really passionate!. And easy to understand, i liked that!Www@QuestionHome@Com